12/16/14

poem


She cringed
as he wandered
through the garden
of her mind,
Examining so closely
the foliage inside

All her tastes, traits and blunders
displayed in clear view
In careful hands
he gathered a few

As he sweetly held up
what others only detest,
She breathed relief at his statement,
"These I like best"
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9 comments:

  1. A.December 16, 2014 at 9:14 PM

    This is gorgeous! You're a wonderful writer :)

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  2. funsizetessaDecember 16, 2014 at 10:43 PM

    I like I like I like I like I like I like I like!

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  3. heidiDecember 17, 2014 at 12:10 AM

    WOw, this is amazing

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  4. DDecember 17, 2014 at 1:00 AM

    oh, what a beautiful poem this is and what a beautiful couple you are.

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  5. CarlyDecember 17, 2014 at 5:29 AM

    *Melting.* <3

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  6. GabrielleDecember 17, 2014 at 12:02 PM

    This is so lovely!

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  7. Samantha HeatherDecember 18, 2014 at 5:54 PM

    oh man! all the feels I am feeling!

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  8. UnknownDecember 20, 2014 at 1:23 PM

    Poem & Pictures fit together as beautifully as you two.

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  9. UnknownDecember 27, 2014 at 10:29 PM

    the feels… your writing. i forgot how much your writing makes me feel, meg. also, i still can't get over your hair. you're perfect.

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